The plan is working Norvin said to himself as he snuck up on Mrs Scorpio Shark! Shark!
Mrs Scorpio screamed, she swam to the beach like she had a jet engine on her back. Norvin went to sneak up on Mr Foster but right then Mr Foster noticed the shark’s dorsal fin had dents
on it and he pulled Norvin out of the water. The next moment Norvin felt a slap on his face and then he threw him in the water and ran away. I wondered why he ran away but at that moment I figured out why he ran away. Shark Shark!
Thank you for reading my ending for the great white man eating shark
Wow josh I like that ending I think you have given me an idea for my ending.
ReplyDeleteCool Josh that is a really interesting ending.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the part where it says, She swam through the water like there was a jet on her back.
From Brody
Cool Josh that is a really cool ending. I really liked were is says She swam through the water like there was a jet on her back. great job.
ReplyDeleteAmazing Joshua!
ReplyDeleteI thought they would figure out that was Norvin but they didn't.
Keep up the good work!