Run! Josh is in, got you Katrina, lets get Brody! Got him. no you don’t. watch out Teva. Oh damn they got me, quick we can get Rhys oh I missed him. Ahhh!!! a real blob. Watch out he’s got a taser and a slime gun, run to the playground. Climb up to the top. Hey look, tennis balls. Throw them at him FIRE! flump, flump. Doh, I forgot he is made out of goo and it just dissolves. Quick wriggle down the slide and run to room 20. Brody come here I need you to kick a soccer ball at him and he will go flying into the wall and I will throw a net over him. On three one, two, three, where’s the soccer ball? Watch out Brody got ya gobble, gobble. YUM, oh no the Blob ate Brody.
Look we can cut the Blob open and get him out. get the knife out of the draw in the office, which draw is it in I don't know try every one. Hey this one’s locked and it is not a keyhole, it looks like I have to use a screwdriver. If I can remember I put one on Mr G’s bench. Okay got the screwdriver time to get the knife out of the draw. Got the knife time to cut open the Blob. Here is the knife. Brody, right I will sneak up behind him with the knife while you are distracting him. Ready Brody?
“Ready.”
Go, hey Blob I'm over here come and get me. Ahhh, Brody where are you? Oh no the Blob ate you again. I’ll get you out Brody hiya, quick run out of him. Brody, I've got an idea we could tie string to the wall and when the Blob wobbles through it will get cut in half. Quick hide he is coming. Snap! Ahhh the string snapped, quick hide behind the table.
I just remembered I seen a program on Discovery Channel last night, it was on how to kill a Blob. It said to steal his taser gun if he has one and shoot him. Good idea Josh I will try it. Look he left it on the floor time to attract him.
“How can we do that?” I think that there is a fake person in the cupboard. I will get it out, who cares about the fake person because here comes. FIRE! Boom! Yes we got him. Let’s tell all the teachers. Mr M we destroyed the blob.
“Well done here is your reward” a free trip to Splash Planet, you are awesome.
Wow Joshua.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poem, My favourite part is when you say Ahhh!!! a real blob. Watch out he’s got a taser and a slime gun. That part is very funny.
What is your favourite part?
My favorite part would be the same as the one you said.
DeleteAwesome I like it so cool
ReplyDeleteAwesome story Josh are you going to write blob part two?
ReplyDeleteI'me going to write part 2 but I don't think it will be as long as part 1.
DeleteFunny ending Joshua,
ReplyDeleteI wish I could get a free pass to splash plant!
Amazinh Josh!
ReplyDeleteyou did a Fabulous job
How Long did it take you to plain it out
From your class mate Eden
I took me about 1 day to plan it and 5 days to get all the ideas.
DeleteAwesome Piglet.
ReplyDeleteI like how you forgot he was made out of goo and how you found the tennis balls. Is your favorite game blob?
Blob and ABC bullrush are my favorite games.
DeleteCool Josh I like it a lot.
ReplyDeleteBut I don't get this part “How can we that?” it is in the last paragrapher?
Wow Josh this story is action packed.
ReplyDeleteThe free trip to Splash Planet is a great ending. I cannot wait till Part 2. Will it be set at Splash Planet?
ReplyDeletei like the part at the start when you're getting everyone and you are saying hurry up come on !
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