The cricket ball By Joshua Heibner
I’ve always been lucky
For Christmas 2013
When Santa gave me my
first cricket test ball.
It was so shiny and clean
that it would shine at
night and it had not been
dropped since I opened it that
night.
It is white with a light green
seme and it has gray, black
and silver words.
Each day I polish it
to keep it gleaming clean
I hope one day it will be
used to hit a 6.
By Joshua Heibner
I like how your poem is about a cricket ball, Josh. You read your poem with clear expression.
ReplyDeleteIt is clever how you made a poster to illustrate your poem. I hope you're batting not bowling when it gets hit for six!
Awesome poem Josh. Was that your favourite cricket ball?
ReplyDeleteWell done I hope you get it over the bounder and farther
What a great poem Josh
ReplyDeleteI love how you have used some amazing describing words to tell us how shiny it is. I hope I will be there watching you when you hit it for a six.
Awesome Josh.
ReplyDeleteI could just imagine the ball looking like a star in the night.
Great Job!