Whitewater rafting

Swish! as our raft got pushed out into the water by the Strikers instructor called Dion. Our raft spun around like mad I felt so dizzy. We head out into the open water, finally we head into the action, Forward paddle!!! HOLD ON! Crash. We go straight into a mammoth sized boulder. Straight ahead we see a group stuck on a rock, we head straight towards them. We knock them off the rock but then we got stuck on it, they laughed at us. We call out to the other group to tell them to come and help us, they head straight towards us SPLASH! They push us into the rapids. WEE! “That was totally awesome,” I said. Lets do it again,” said Rhys. The raft weaved in and out of the jagged rocks then SMASH!! We hit Carnage Corner. Our raft runs half way up Carnage Corner, but where did Brody go? “Brody where are you?” we called out. “Here I am,” he said. “Weren't you meant to be over here?” “Yes I was,” he said. I heard Dion say that we're nearly finished. “One more jump out of the raft,” he said. “Ok,” we said. “WEE” Splash! We all hop back into the raft, we head towards land. “That was awesome,” I said. “I want to do it again,” Rhys said. When we got to land we had to load the rafts onto the bus trailer. We head to the camp again. “I want to do that again,” I said.
 By Joshua