Have you ever felt the hot runny sweat dripping down your head from sprinting?
Well have you ever heard the orchestra of insects and birds?
That was summer
Have you ever heard the bees buzzing all around you or
Well have you ever heard the orchestra of insects and birds?
That was summer
Have you ever heard the bees buzzing all around you or
Have you ever felt the itchy dead grass driving you crazy?
Have you ever dived into the pool and it felt like ice?
That was summer
That was summer
Have you ever been to the beach to feel the silky sand
squelching between you’re toes,
and coming home with a sun burnt nose?
Remember the smell of the BBQ and the hot muggy nights.
That was summer.
The "silky sand squelching..." is superb alliteration. I can smell the BBQ and feel the hot muggy nights.
ReplyDeleteGood job using alliteration joshua
ReplyDeletegreat job on your writing I love it your writing it great
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